duets with other poets – flitashez


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“…the more you love the more you suffer…”

-Lao Tzu

 

RADdreamz1AlexGrey.com

 

I wrote of love

a tale of pinot and roses   

And a first kiss

lips uncorking ancient bottles   

Envisioned a life

of silver grapes and harvest moons

Full of dreams and bliss

ruby lips and sapphire poses

Pictured conversations

ending in sweet incantations   

Of all that matter and don’t,

of honey bees and dragonflys   

Over coffee, or wine

through starless nights and onyx moons

Or with our TV on.

amidst bitter accusations

 

Promised I would solve

the enigmas in the shadows

All the possible fights.

meaningless recriminations

In the form of poetry

or mystical theology

I shared my plights.

we pierced our hart with vile arrows

 

Perfectly balanced

you crushed fruit into vinegar

Love and war

preserving equanimity

Waged among us

fermenting sour futility

Within, forevermore.

languor decanting our anger

And some time later

beyond the pale of nevermore

You spotted me somewhere.

i captured you in your conceit

Had a smirk on your face

a snarl on your lips of deceit

And fixated stare.

confusing a queen with your whores

Love at first sight,

rarely if ever turns out right

Or the beginning of strife?

love is double-edged knife

Whatever this may be,

even dante cannot set us free

I think I wrote you into life.

 

RADdreamz2AlexGrey.com

 

love blooms amidst sapphire midnights

 

Roja Ariel Douglas http://raddreamz.wordpress.com/ November 6, 2013.
chrétien marc valentin

(© 28 juli 2014)

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16 Responses to duets with other poets – flitashez

  1. flirtashez says:

    Reblogged this on RAD dreamz and commented:
    I love what he’s done with the poem. A whole new perspective.

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  2. feministepoetique says:

    I absolutely adore this poem! Great job 🙂

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  3. Penlateral says:

    Beautiful collaboration , thank you for sharing

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  4. Pingback: #Poetry – I wrote of #Love | johndwmacdonald

  5. Praise given to Flitasehz for her original poem, but what you have done with it is truly marvelous! Just love your ‘duets’ 🙂

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  6. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    BRAVO…FOR THE COUNTERPOINTS!!!

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  7. Simona says:

    ▐▬▌αρρу Wєєк ♥

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    • Hey Gorgeous Woman! I have been too busy in my private life to blog for about two weeks! I hope to catch-up with your blog soon: It was one of the most beautiful blogs I have visited, both the format and content! ❤ marc

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