(there is so much beautiful word candy in the blogsphere thesedays everyday is Halloween for a such a ‘word junky’ as the decadent poet maudit that we are is – so even so, there is a devotional simplicity in the words of himani b that harmonizes with lao tzu, mirabai and hafiz (to name but three) that refreshes the soul…she is as the head-waters of a mountain stream…here is a poetess whose suffering has not made her cynical but compassionate…she is emily dickenson (a life-long companion on my pilgrimage and that now makes four!) reincarnated!!!…enjoy the word play of our mystical dansing together…further up is further into ‘wonderment’ to borrow a word coined by our sister ‘greye wolfe’ (christen lore weber) and now we have five! -> TEN WHITE BEADS…^^~~~~
words
words words words
(to the Beloved Muse of muses and her shadows)
“The Tao is beyond words and beyond understanding…”
-Lao Tzu
words
words shattering words scrambling words
can’t articulate
without bifurcating
how you stir my soul
awestruck spiraling into adoration
in quiet contemplation
perfecting my absolute devotion
…..
one with the breeze, my
wings teaching the clouds to danse our
beautiful hart sister
your psalm is the wind lifting these wings
you are my sacred hart of harts
himani b tenderheartmusings.wordpress.com
chrétien marc valentin
(© 22 juli 2014)
“your psalm is the wind lifting these wings”
Beautiful poem 🙂
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please tell himani b! 🙂
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Will do I am following her too 🙂
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❤ u sister!
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not as beautiful as you are to me! spread your wings & fly butterfly! 🙂
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noooo… 🙂 but I’ll keep flying 🙂
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no?
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Maybe lol
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aAHWHhooi! ~~~~^^*^^~~~~
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Marc, I took the post down 🙂
I butchered it, cut it short because it’s too personal and I’m not brave enough to let it all out. The ending was different in the original draft even the title. Totally lost its meaning.
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…hmm? that explains it! great poetry is defined by a fine line between the personal & universal, the intimate & explicite, the private & public! you were very close to walking that line in that poem! finish it even if u do not publish it! if u want – since i already read it several times – send it to me & i will make some editorial suggestions! writing is your path! be true to it & yourself at whatever the cost! Gnothi Seauton! dafree_whitewolfe@hotmail.com. let me know ok? i meant to encourage, not discourage! there is too much pretty stuff in the blogsphere & not enough gritty truth! beauty need truth! ❤ u! marc
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Thank you for the encouragement. I needed those words. I will send it when I’m ready 🙂
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luv u hart sister…^^~~~~
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So kind, so generous, Marc! I am humbled beyond words ❤ Thanks a million for yet another gorgeous creation of yours, it has left me in awe! You're so talented. I treasure it alongwith the two others you have graciously shared..means a lot 🙂
Wishing you much love and the best of all that is good in this world and beyond!
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methinks there not 3 but 4 duets your ancient tender hart inspires!!! ❤ u hb!
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beloved sister! please revisit the duet with madstoffa! there is a present hidden near the end just 4 u! i had some editing to do on this one! ❤ u!
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v posted today beloved one! ❤ u
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Ooh I have to catch with you lovely space, I think I need to bookmark it haha Thank you Marc, sending you my love ❤
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duet vi published beloved sister! ❤
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